Walt: Write complex sentences.
Your Work: Google slides.
Reflection:
What have you been learning? Complex sentences.
Describe what your digital learning object shows about your learning? I learned how to write complex sentences.
What did you enjoy or find challenging? I did not know how to write a complex sentence now I do.
What might you do differently next time? Nothing.
Kia ora Kentaro, Ko Breeze toku ingoa. Ko Te Ngahere taku akomanga. I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I remember changing simple sentences to complex sentences. I love your sentence about the mouse because it is very detailed and looks like you to the time to make this sentence. I wouldn’t have known to add these detailed words in a complex sentence if it wasn’t for you and I wouldn’t have written about a mouse if I didn’t read your blog post. What would your next complex sentence be about?
ReplyDeleteHello Breeze, Ken here. Thank you for your comment, it was very nice.
DeleteI think my next complex sentence would be about my favourite sport probably. I glad you found my post helpful.
Thank you for your comment. KEN
Kia ora. My name is Dale and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about complex sentences because you wrote a really good complex sentence. I have also learnt about complex sentences before and I thought that it was really interesting.
ReplyDeleteDid you know anything about complex sentences before your teacher taught you?
Hello Kentaro my name is Zane and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about complex sentences because it reminds me of when my class had to write complex sentences too but we had to write simple and compound sentences as well. I like the way you added what you enjoyed and what you found challenging because I’ve barely seen people write about that. What do you think was easy about writing a complex sentence?
ReplyDeleteHi Kentaro my name is Marley and I am a year 6 student a Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I used to love changing simple sentences to complex sentences. I really liked your sentence about the mouse it is very interesting and it has so much detail I love it. We have been doing similar stuff to this my sentence is, I was in a boat going slowly, then I saw a Rocket ship sinking in the water. What is your next sentence going to be?
ReplyDeleteHi Kentaro my name is Ebony and I am from Paihia School. I was reading your post about a complex sentence and I thought it was very interesting! In my class we have also been learning about complex sentences. Have you ever done anything about simple sentences?
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter, my name is Breeze and I’m a year 8 student from Paihia School. I like how you added a great background and kind messages to remind others. I really like your blog post about Manaakitanga because our school has four hoe (Manaakitanga being one of them.) We try to become successful by encouraging others by using all four hoe including Manaakitanga. Do you have any other hoe?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kentaro. My name is Shay and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about Complex sentences because you had an interesting sentence about the mouse. I have also learnt about complex sentences and I thought that it was really interesting.
ReplyDeleteDid you learn anything about Complex Sentences?
Hi Kentaro my name is Alana and I am a year six from Paihia School. In my class we have also been learning about complex sentences, your post was interesting and I liked how you described the picture very well. I like the way you said that he was sweating furiously and that he gently picked up the cheese.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think was easy about writing your complex sentence?
Hi Kentaro my name is Isabella and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I used to love changing simple sentences to complex sentences. I really liked your sentence about the mouse it is very interesting and it has so much detail. We have been doing similar stuff to what you have been doing.
ReplyDeleteWhat would your next complex sentence be about?
Hello my name is Aaron and I am a year six at Paihia School. I really loved your blog post about complex sentences for an image. I think this is really interesting. My class has also been learning about simple, compound and complex sentences I think that was really fun.
ReplyDeleteDo you use complex sentences in your writing?